asmanjas mein hai pade
kismat layi mode wahi
sach kya hai aur jhoot kya
nahi pata kya hai sahi
jinke liye hai dil dhadakta
unhe humse hai pyaar nahi
jo de rahe humare liye jaan
unka hum par dost se jyada adhikaar nahi
dosti aur mohabbat mein
uljhi aisi humari jindagi
na chahat ka pyaar pa sake
na dost ki wo dosti rahi
duniya aage badh gayi
par hum hain kehete wahi
chahate the hum jinhe
unhe thi humari kadar nahi
aur jinhe humari thi kadar
chah kar bhi hum unhe chah paye nahi.
Hmmmm… yeh to hindi movie ki story ho gayi.. hope its not ur’s.. hey hey.. but very nicely said..
By: Daman on May 29, 2008
at 5:33 am
no comments!
only compliments of picturing some1 else’s emotions so beautifully!
By: casperbaba on May 29, 2008
at 2:57 pm
@Daman
nahi dude … not mine …
thanks
@Casper
!!
!!
By: DD on May 29, 2008
at 3:37 pm
Last four lines *sigh* .. it also was the story of my life..
(par ab hai humein.. kisi ki bhi parwaah nahi)
By: Aria on May 29, 2008
at 5:13 pm
poem hamne poori padhi
par baat aayi samajh nahi
ki aajkal kya hua aapko ?
ban rahe ho kya devdaas kahin ?
kya baki chijen khatam ho gayi
jo har tym ladki ladki dikhti rahi…
itna mat doobe ishk main babu
bahut barbad ho gaye yuhi…
By: Raghvendra on May 29, 2008
at 8:08 pm
@Aria
in upar ki baat ke saath
keheta hoon ek aur baat sahi
thoda dukh aa jane se
jindagi jina chod dena nahi
@Raghav
jo tumne kavita ke roop mein padha
wo mere dil ka haal nahi
doosron ka dard kalam mein bhar
rachan gadhane ki aadat humari rahi
unki taklif apne vicharon ke jariye
duniya se humne hai kahi
kya ab bhi tumko hai lagata
ki ladaki hai mujh par haavi ho rahi ?
By: DD on May 29, 2008
at 9:12 pm
beautiful!
You gotta a beautiful skill of poetry
By: Jyoti on May 30, 2008
at 6:07 pm
@Jyoti
thanks a ton !! [:)]
Good to see you back !!
By: DD on May 31, 2008
at 9:26 am
i wud love to add the poetry but i dont hav ethat skil
bt i enjoy gud “shayeri”
keep up
By: S.Ghosh on May 31, 2008
at 5:27 pm
@S.Ghosh
i am glad u liked it !!
hope to see ur comments again !!
By: DD on May 31, 2008
at 6:48 pm
Nice One Deepesh!! I must say I like you better with English than Hindi.
You have a rather Good hold over English. Humor is unbeatable … and English Poetry is also mind blowing … i remember ‘SHE’ very well.
I hope you’ll keep coming up with good stuff and i’ll be here hanging about a lot more.
By: Tosha on June 8, 2008
at 2:51 am
Sab hi yaha shayar hai..
To hum kyo peeche rahe sahi..
Par smajh nahi aa raha..
ke aakhir kahe to kahe kya buddy..
Hume pata hai ki ye nahi hai tumhare dil ka haal…
To yahi dua karte hai, ki tumhari aisi haalat na ho kabhi..
I know it was terrible.. So don make that face..
It was really good..
By: Anonymous on January 2, 2009
at 8:34 pm