Posted by: DD | May 28, 2008

Pyaar aur Dosti

asmanjas mein hai pade
kismat layi mode wahi

sach kya hai aur jhoot kya
nahi pata kya hai sahi

jinke liye hai dil dhadakta
unhe humse hai pyaar nahi

jo de rahe humare liye jaan
unka hum par dost se jyada adhikaar nahi

dosti aur mohabbat mein
uljhi aisi humari jindagi

na chahat ka pyaar pa sake
na dost ki wo dosti rahi

duniya aage badh gayi
par hum hain kehete wahi

chahate the hum jinhe
unhe thi humari kadar nahi

aur jinhe humari thi kadar
chah kar bhi hum unhe chah paye nahi.

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Responses

  1. Hmmmm… yeh to hindi movie ki story ho gayi.. hope its not ur’s.. hey hey.. but very nicely said..

  2. no comments!
    only compliments of picturing some1 else’s emotions so beautifully!

  3. @Daman
    nahi dude … not mine …
    thanks 🙂

    @Casper
    !! 🙂 !!

  4. Last four lines *sigh* .. it also was the story of my life..
    (par ab hai humein.. kisi ki bhi parwaah nahi)

  5. poem hamne poori padhi
    par baat aayi samajh nahi

    ki aajkal kya hua aapko ?
    ban rahe ho kya devdaas kahin ?

    kya baki chijen khatam ho gayi
    jo har tym ladki ladki dikhti rahi…

    itna mat doobe ishk main babu
    bahut barbad ho gaye yuhi…

  6. @Aria
    in upar ki baat ke saath
    keheta hoon ek aur baat sahi

    thoda dukh aa jane se
    jindagi jina chod dena nahi

    @Raghav
    jo tumne kavita ke roop mein padha
    wo mere dil ka haal nahi

    doosron ka dard kalam mein bhar
    rachan gadhane ki aadat humari rahi

    unki taklif apne vicharon ke jariye
    duniya se humne hai kahi

    kya ab bhi tumko hai lagata
    ki ladaki hai mujh par haavi ho rahi ? 😀

  7. beautiful!

    You gotta a beautiful skill of poetry

  8. @Jyoti
    thanks a ton !! [:)]
    Good to see you back !!

  9. i wud love to add the poetry but i dont hav ethat skil 😦
    bt i enjoy gud “shayeri”

    keep up

  10. @S.Ghosh
    i am glad u liked it !!
    hope to see ur comments again !!

  11. Nice One Deepesh!! I must say I like you better with English than Hindi.

    You have a rather Good hold over English. Humor is unbeatable … and English Poetry is also mind blowing … i remember ‘SHE’ very well.

    I hope you’ll keep coming up with good stuff and i’ll be here hanging about a lot more. 😛

  12. Sab hi yaha shayar hai..
    To hum kyo peeche rahe sahi..

    Par smajh nahi aa raha..
    ke aakhir kahe to kahe kya buddy..

    Hume pata hai ki ye nahi hai tumhare dil ka haal…
    To yahi dua karte hai, ki tumhari aisi haalat na ho kabhi..

    I know it was terrible.. So don make that face..
    It was really good..


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